Crafting Your College Essay: A Comprehensive Guide to Topics and Strategies
The college application process can feel overwhelming, especially when it comes to the essay. It's your chance to showcase your personality, skills, and experiences beyond grades and test scores. Empowering your future, for college and beyond, involves mastering this crucial element. This guide provides a comprehensive overview of college essay topics, brainstorming techniques, and strategies to help you craft a compelling and authentic personal statement.
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Brainstorming Exercises to Discover Your Unique Story
Before diving into a list of topics, it's crucial to engage in brainstorming exercises to uncover your unique story. Great brainstorming is key to a great application. These exercises will help you identify experiences, values, and insights that can form the foundation of a compelling essay.
Exercise 1: The "Collection of Moments"
This activity helps create a ton of content for your personal statement and add texture to bring your essay to life. It's a fun and reflective way to identify meaningful moments in your life.
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Click here for a list of questions to help you with the exercise.
Exercise 2: "Things You Want Colleges to Know About You"
This exercise encourages you to make a list of all the things you want colleges to know about you. You can do this either:
- in a bulletpoint format (organized, easy to read)
- on a blank sheet of paper (with drawings, get creative)
- on a timeline
For more detailed instructions, head here.
Essay Topics and Ideas: Inspiration from Real Students
Here’s a list of essay topics and ideas that worked for my one-on-one students:
Overcoming Challenges and Discovering Passions
- Essay Topic: My Allergies Inspired Me. After nearly dying from anaphylactic shock at five years old, I began a journey healing my anxiety and understanding the PTSD around my allergies. This created a passion for medicine and immunology, and now I want to become an allergist so no other child will have to feel the same.
- Essay Topic: From Homeschool to the Football Field. Instead of my original plan of playing football in high school, I freed myself of my fear of social interactions and my age gap by discovering a love for coaching.
- Essay Topic: My First Flight Failed, But My Love Was Born. While my attempt at flight when I was five years old ended in disaster, my passion only grew as I became older. My love of engineering has taught me collaboration, social justice, curiosity, and diligence.
- Essay Topic: My Cosmetic Journey. Although I initially saw my interest in cosmetics as a superficial obsession, through research and advocacy I’m now a community leader and online advocate for ethical cosmetics testing and labeling.
- Essay Topic: Transformers Are Not Just for Boys. Being punished for playing with transformers because they “aren’t for girls” didn’t stop me from becoming passionate about robotics, where I created and fought for an open source platform that educates children about robotics around the world.
- Essay Topic: The Instagram Post. Being publicly shamed for my pro-choice stance taught me to be passionate about my point of view, and now I understand that, while dissent and social justice are sometimes painful, they are sometimes necessary.
Exploring Identity and Values
- Essay Topic: My Foreign Exchange Experience. My 28 months in America living with five families helped me develop five values: open mindedness, spending quality time with family, understanding, discipline, and genuine appreciation.
- Essay Topic: Lessons From My Pilgrimage to Mecca. My pilgrimage to Mecca taught me that I am valuable and family is centrally important. Now, I'm proud of my heritage, passionate about languages, and excited to bring all of it to college.
- Essay Topic: Where I’m Home. I find myself feeling at “home” wherever I am, whether it’s spending quality time eating chicken with my family, diligently working on my chemistry research in the lab, or expanding my world through my college electives at Governor's School East.
- Essay Topic: Easter, Travel, and Dad. Despite my abusive father’s wishes, I took a trip abroad and discovered my independence. Now, I want to pursue international relations and women’s studies to help women around the world discover who they are.
- Essay Topic: My Self-Proclaimed Identity. I love writing, philosophy, speech and debate… and punk rock music. But I am not any one of these things, because I am all of them. I call myself a “punk-rock philosopher.”
- Essay Topic: How Traveling Led to My Love of Language. My experiences traveling around the world influenced my interest in language and human connection. That interest is what I want to bring into my dual majors of foreign language and linguistics.
Finding Purpose and Meaning
- Essay Topic: Why Did the Chicken Cross the Road? I’ve created my own essay prompt: why did the chicken cross the road? In short, the chicken discovers that her idyllic world is not all it seems, and she must cross the road to discover her true purpose in life. She may come to realize that the world is more terrible and beautiful than she’s ever known.
- Essay Topic: A Palestinian Hunger Strike Turns Into a Purpose. My experience supporting a hunger strike in my native land, and watching my fellow students slowly lose interest in the strike and my protest, taught me to be passionate about social justice and inspired the creation of my own ethical clothing company.
- Essay Topic: Poop, Animals, and the Environment. I don’t mind being pooped on, bitten or scratched because my passion for animals is bigger than all of that. I know the world is rife with environmental problems, and I’m ready to spend my life making a difference.
- Essay Topic: A Word a Day, A Life of Imagination. The NYT word of the day reminds me of something: my own imagination. My curiosity has taught me to love playing basketball, the violin, and inventing new words.
- Essay Topic: My Grandmother Passing. My grandmother is my source of inspiration. When she passed away I couldn’t help but reflect on my love of family, passion for education, and my volunteering experiences at a cancer treatment center.
- Essay Topic: My Grandma’s Kimchi. I’ll always remember the passion and attention to detail my grandmother put into making kimchi. Watching my grandmother eventually lose her ability to make this important dish made me reflect on memory, death, and the importance of family. Now I’m the one who makes the kimchi.
- Essay Topic: A Girl Muses on a Dead Bird. One day, my cat attacked a bird in the front yard. In my vain attempt at saving its life, I was forced to reconcile with losing one of my best friends in a tragic accident years ago.
- Essay Topic: I Shot My Brother. My lifelong jealousy towards my little brother erupted when I shot him with a bb gun. Haunted with guilt, I sought to treat my brother with newfound respect and love, and learned the importance of family.
Common Application Essay Prompts: A Detailed Breakdown
Over 1,000 colleges accept the The Common Application , which makes it easy to apply to multiple schools with just one form. The Common Application provides several essay prompts to choose from. Here's a breakdown of each prompt and how to approach it:
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- Prompt #1: Share your story. Answer this prompt by reflecting on a hobby, facet of your personality, or experience that is genuinely meaningful and unique to you. Admissions officers want to feel connected to you and an honest, personal statement about who you are draws them in. Your love of superheroes, baking chops, or family history are all fair game if you can tie it back to who you are or what you believe in.
- Prompt #2: Learning from obstacles. You're trying to show colleges your best self, so it might seem counterintuitive to willingly acknowledge a time you struggled. But overcoming challenges demonstrates courage, grit, and perseverance! That’s why the last piece of this prompt is essential. The obstacle you write about can be large or small, but you must show the admissions committee how your perspective changed as a result.
- Prompt #3: Challenging a belief. Your answer to this question could focus on a time you stood up to others or an experience when your own preconceived view was challenged. Choose this prompt if you have a relevant-and specific!-experience to recount (and reflect on). A vague essay about a hot button issue doesn’t tell the admissions committee anything useful about YOU.
- Prompt #4: Reflecting on gratitude. Colleges are looking for students with unique experiences that can enhance their future campus community, and this is your chance to share that by recognizing what someone else has done for you. Even though this prompt requires you to reflect on the action of another person, make sure that the focus remains on how the act of kindness impacted you and the way you live your life. This essay should make you and the reader smile.
- Prompt #5: Personal growth. Just like Prompt #2, the accomplishment or event you write about can be anything from a major milestone to a smaller "aha" moment. Describe the event or accomplishment that shaped you but take care to also show what you learned or how you changed.
- Prompt #6: What captivates you? This prompt is an invitation to write about something you care about. (So avoid the pitfall of writing about what you think will impress the admission office versus what truly matters to you). Colleges are looking for curious students, who are thoughtful about the world around them. The "what or who do you turn to when you want to learn more” bit isn't an afterthought-it's a key piece of the prompt. Make sure you explain how you pursue your interest, as well.
- Prompt #7: Topic of your choice. This question might be for you if you have a dynamo personal essay from English class to share or were really inspired by a question from another college’s application. You can even write your own question! Whatever topic you land on, the essentials of a standout college essay still stand: 1.) Show the admissions committee who you are beyond grades and test scores and 2.) Dig into your topic by asking yourself how and why. There isn’t a prompt to guide you, so you must ask yourself the questions that will get at the heart of the story you want to tell.
Supplemental Essays: Tailoring Your Application to Specific Schools
Individual schools sometimes require supplemental essays. These essays provide an opportunity to demonstrate your specific interest in the institution and showcase aspects of your personality that may not be evident in your main essay. Here are some common supplemental essay prompts and tips for answering them:
- Describe a person you admire. Avoid the urge to pen an ode to a beloved figure like Gandhi or Abraham Lincoln. The admissions committee doesn't need to be convinced they are influential people.
- Why do you want to attend this school? Be honest and specific when you respond to this question. Avoid generalities like "to get a good liberal arts education” or “to develop career skills," and use details that show your interests: "I'm an aspiring doctor and your science department has a terrific reputation." Colleges are more likely to admit students who can articulate specific reasons why the school is a good fit for them beyond its reputation or ranking on any list.
- What is a book you love? Your answer should not be a book report. Don't just summarize the plot; detail why you enjoyed this particular text and what it meant to you. What does your favorite book reveal about you? Again, be honest in answering this question-don't choose a classic from your literature class or a piece of philosophy just because you think it will make you seem smarter. Writing fluently and passionately about a book close to you is always better than writing shakily or generally about a book that doesn't inspire you.
- What is an extracurricular activity that has been meaningful to you? Avoid slipping into clichés or generalities. Take this opportunity to really examine an experience that taught you something you didn't previously know about yourself, got you out of your comfort zone, or forced you to grow. Sometimes it's better to write about something that was hard for you because you learned something than it is to write about something that was easy for you because you think it sounds admirable. As with all essay questions, the most important thing is to tell a great story: how you discovered this activity, what drew you to it, and what it's shown you about yourself.
- Students at Yale have time to explore their academic interests before committing to one or more major fields of study. Many students either modify their original academic direction or change their minds entirely. As of this moment, what academic areas seem to fit your interests or goals most comfortably? Tell us about a topic or idea that excites you and is related to one or more academic areas you selected above. Why are you drawn to it?
- Other than a family member, who is someone who has had a significant influence on you?
Testimonials: Real Stories from Empowerly Students
What Empowerly students and their families are saying.
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- “I’m a senior right now with Empowerly, but have been with the program since sophomore year. I’ve found the services to be very helpful, and especially so in my senior year with essay writing. My counselor is so helpful when it comes to brainstorming ideas for supplementals and framing the experiences I’ve had in school in a unique way. He’s helped me find my voice as a writer in this process, and I’m very grateful for it! He is also very easy to meet with, and intentionally keeps his schedule open even late into the night for his PST students (we’ve had calls to edit essays together close to midnight).”- Pranavi R.
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- “I joined Empowerly in the beginning of senior year of high school. My counselor immediately worked with me to brainstorm essay ideas, build resume, and offered a valuable perspective in the process. He was very prompt with his responses and ensured that I stay on track. The Essay Editorial team was also fantastic. The whole process is streamlined and helps reduce stress and anxiety. I highly recommend Empowerly.”- Monika T.
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